Tonight John Morgan showed up at the workshop. I was showing off my existing versions of my Valentine's and Mia Wallace jokes when I had to explain to him that a lot of my set consists of material based on my failures with the ladies. John Doelling said that the way I explained it to John Morgan was very realistic and personable. I'm going to have to go back over my recording to see exactly what he means.
Lloyd and Harry's was interesting as always. Brian Dowell completly upset some dude in the bar. The guy tried to heckle, but failed, so when I went up I tried to relate to him. I started off with my skiing jokes, because I figured no one can get offended at those. The guy did not get offended, but I didn't exactly tickle his funny bone either. Anyway, I jumped around subject-wise and eventually did my Valentine's and Mia Wallace jokes, which did alright. I also talked about a girl I had a date with (and have another date with). The basis of that joke is that she's too good for me, and it's only a matter of time before she realizes it. I ended on a weird line, which was something like "This isn't so much a joke as it is a cry for help", it got a laugh, but I think I could find a better close for that line. It's probably been said before anyway.
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